ADDING DETAIL TO THE END

WALT Add detail to the end

Akiko works in a sushi bar where she cuts seaweed up,and puts rice and different meat in.

Baleen whales eat plankton and krill,because they have no teeth to eat big fish.

Learning my time tables is important,because it helps when you get up to divider bys

Ernest Shackleton

Ernest Shackleton was an explorer.He went to     Antarctica and tried to make it to the center of the south pole.He could've made it but they had no food but just enough for some of Ernest Shackleton's men. so they turned back to the hut or if they kept going they will die of starvation .       
Calvin Ernest Shackleton from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

We are adding detail in the middle of sentences

WALT add detail in the middle of sentences.

Mr Burt, who  is our leader of our school, and is accomplished on the guitar,   

takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, every week just to see  all of the  kids at school on Friday.

Lots of people, from the pacific Island come and.  visit Auckland City in New Zealand.

Tangrams

We are doing Tangram a tangram is when you look at a house and you  cut out shapes and try to make the house out of shapes. Tangram is not just when you look at something and you paste shapes tangram is also a Chinese puzzle.  How you do it is first we coloured in the shapes and cut out them then we got some pva glue and paste it.

How you do it is first we colored in the shapes and cut out them then we got some pva glue and paste it onto the piece  of paper. Then we took a snap shot and post it on our blog.